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God DAMN that was hot. Very well written and true enough to the characters without overdoing it.

I love Sokka and Suki, and I've never read a fic about them that was this good and sweet. C3 Thanks for writing it, even if it was only on request. You have a knack for realistic detail. I really like it. Thank you. I enjoyed it. :)

Aww I loved this. You write Sokka very well. I liked the part where he was good w/ knots and I can't tell you how much I loved this line *I hope I don’t wimp out. This is already hurting my back. Must… be… manly…*


So Sokka, and the laughing at the end was sweet and great between them, I really enjoyed this story.

It was very realistic for me. Their emotions, their shyness, fears, doubt and other awkward feelings are things all inexperienced couples go through. Most smut out there portrays first-time couples ALWAYS knowing what to do and how to please each other, but this was nothing like that, Sokka and Suki showed very real emotions and reactions to the sex act, which made it this story very good.
And one part I found very interesting was when you mentioned Suki ritualistically breaking her hymen (at least that's what I interpreted it as).
This was an entirely amazing fan fiction experience for me, thank you.

Good lord Suki is a super freak!

But I loved, though. Great job!

I always love reading your work.

Amazing
I love that side of Suki
She is one of the hottest babes on Avatar

Exactly what I was looking for when I came to AFF tonight! For some reason Sokka/Suki is like no other ship when it comes to smut. I really love what you did with this, though. It was perfect in all ways I could possibly think of. :) Keep up the good work!

You always have something interesting to write.

Awesome as always, Gunwild. Could stand to be a little longer...and because I'm one of those romantic types, could do with some post-coital monologuing about Suki's fears that her weakness would make her undesirable (since pride is a pretty distinctive aspect of her personality), which you alluded to at the beginning, and Sokka's response to it.

If you're still looking for a proofreader, I've included my email in this review since I am known on occaision to do such things professionally. I'd be happy to be of service to you, since I have so enjoyed your work.