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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kinky sounding! i like it! Cant wait to read next chapter!! You're a good writer, your characters stay in themselves and you paint a believable picture!
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellant story! Love the Jet/Katara/Zuko idea.
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brillant.
I can't wait to seewhat more you come up with.
Will the rest of the Freedom Fighters be joining in?
I can't wait to seewhat more you come up with.
Will the rest of the Freedom Fighters be joining in?
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so much! It is impressive how you manage to keep everyone in character and at the same time making their personalities more realistic, their dialogs more like it would be if they were real teenagers, with their respective different social backgrounds. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter! yay, smut!!!
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far! Eagerly anticipating the next chapter!!:)
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jet seems very Mugen-ish in this and its cute. I like the premise, I curious to see where're you're going with this.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey! nice start. Curious as to where it could go.
Is this just a PWP (Porn without plot) with the next chapter completing this short piece or will this be turning into an actual story, just full of lemony goodness?
Is this just a PWP (Porn without plot) with the next chapter completing this short piece or will this be turning into an actual story, just full of lemony goodness?
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So nice to see you here, hun! I love this story so much! Nomnomnom!