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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice story with a healthy dose of eroticism. Keep up the good work.
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update and the overt sexin part is making it an even interesting story, LOL. There is some art on DA that is close to your story I'll post the link when I see them again.
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how you're using this story line Ojibwe, Kim finds out that her Ron has been keeping things from her. Now she has found out that he had been trying to better himself for years. She has come to fall in love with him. Will this become permanent? I can just hope for that. I guess you can as well. I you are doing well with this as you have with your others. Good job.
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the story and detail. keep up the good work. i'll be waiting for the next chapter
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very well done, great chapter.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was great. I love the way the scenes are described and the characters portrayed. Please continue.
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 was Very Hot plese continue.
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Interesting diversion from your tales at FF . net
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excelent! Great story, please continue.