rate_review Reviews

for Fallen Angel of The Young Ones

by chester31

person Anon

schedule July 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM

When are you gonna update this?

person islandofinsanity

schedule September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM

I enjoyed this story. Though I don't enjoy too much brutality done to Sheila I must say it was well written.

person RanaKane

schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM

I don't know what else to say other than I'm loving it! There's that inner conflict within Sheila. She doesn't want to want him, but she can't help herself. I wouldn't be able to help myself either. Not in my current state, which is drunk from red wine and horny from your damned pornfics. LOL I want another sexy Venger dream!

person RanaKane

schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Chapter Three:

Caviar and champagne. . . . Oo, and sushi! Squid . . . , Oh, story, right.
*reads more*
Damn! Man, sometimes I wonder about you. You scare me sometimes. ;)
Erotic shit!

person RanaKane

schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Chapter Four

Bring the blood! Nice vampiric touch. Yeah, I know, not exactly vampiric, but still. Nice.

I really liked the mention of that scene in which Venger touched Sheila. Some choose to overlook that moment, but I think it was a key moment in the series.

person RanaKane

schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM

This is a review for chapter one.

Good introductory chapter. We have the setting and situation established though an example of what I perceive to be one of Sheila's typical days. And *ahem* not a bad situation at that.

Thought of Rice's Lasher when Sheila received the large green gem on the necklace.

person FallenAngelgirl

schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Very hardcore. Extermely intense and a lot of power to this. Follows with your own set universe very well.

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