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I really enjoy the story so far. I'm really hoping for an update soon. On a side note, the opening of chapter three seemed kind of awkward, like you were planning the story to go a different way at the end of chapter two and changed your mind. Hopefully you didn't do that because of one or two unapproving reviews. I mean, it's a fake story, no one's really advocating cousins having sex while their grandfather watches. And when you think about it, what's the difference between Max watching them, and us reading this? I guess what I'm trying to say is, write the story that you want to write. If someone doesn't like it, there's thousands of other stories on this site.

I really like this story and hope you continue.

This story is freeking awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should deffenantly continue with this story.

More, for the love of God and country, more!

I HAVE to see where this goes!

really enjoyed please continue

Great story so far! Very well-written and awesome! Please continue!

I kind think that was a alien form of masturbation... and now 4 gwens? (Excuse me.... steps into shower cranks it up to Antaritic cold and dives in still dressed.) Okay I feel better and I would like to say PLEASE FOR THE DEAR SAKE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY MORE AND SOON!!!!! Seriously 4 gwens with ben HORNY!?! OH god.... Ben had better find that Master code again cause he's going to need it. Please more and soon.

Cool a new chapter! So grandpa Max is a voyeur... Ben's dad is a perv... and Gwen is horny as high heaven!!! Okay that's it (gets on hands and knees) PLEASE MORE SOON!!! I can't wait which alien form Gwen gets to play with... the possiblities YIKES!!!

I love it! Please update soon.

Oh please tell me that Ben will use the other aliens to fuck Gwen later on, also will Upgrades cum get Gwen Pregnant or will she be able to turn into a female version of Upgrade herself?