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for Twelve Hours

by SickPuppy

person 4 me 2 no & u not 2 find out
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEEAAASE MAKE A THIRD CHAPTER!!!!!
person Usagiyoukai
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please do Finn and Junko next, I want to see what happened with them, they were alone in the cell after all. ^_^
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, so good so far. Love the plot & can't wait to read about the other's time. Wondering how got naughty with Finn. And I agree with the others, need some Stork and/or raptor slash in there too!
person Murray
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! I loved this so far, however it needs more DAxA, its truly an under-appreciated pairing.
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to do one for Stork? Hmmmm, like there could be a reason why he was late getting them out, like someone getting on board the Condor and showing him a good (or bad) time?
person hmavailability
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goddamn that was really hot. :] Especially the second chapter hehe.
Hmm, I'm trying to contemplate the other pairings if you continue this. Not sure if Snipe/Finn or Ravess/Finn would be sexier? Perhaps a menage a trois? ;)
person accountless
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy smokes! You have no idea how refreshing it is to read a (smutty)Storm Hawks fic that doesn't make ya want to claw your eyes out.
Nicely done ~ And you managed to nab my two absolute OTPs in the first two chapters C: . Thank you very much for this!
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story

How about one of the others having an encounter with Repton? The raptors are allied with the Cyclonians so there's a chance he could be on Cyclonia at the time of the 'Hawks capture.
person Anon
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Gods, there's nothing like a good yaoi after a hard school day. *shiver* Mmm, DAxA love it!