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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been wondering for a while now, when will you be updating this story? It's pretty well written and crosses over themes which are somewhat rare on this board (I don't know why so many people skipped over the Ba Sing Se inductions when writing adult fiction), and it deserves to be continued.
Ah well. Still, I enjoyed it. I hope you haven't given up on this entirely is all.
Ah well. Still, I enjoyed it. I hope you haven't given up on this entirely is all.
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now, that was unexpected. I am definitely eager to see where Zuko does with this. Also, i would suggest that you enable anon reviews so that you can get more reviews for this fantastic piece of work.
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The description of what Katara was experiencing while the programming was kicking in I praise for the detail and its ability to make my skin crawl a bit. It was creepy, but cool. Excellent job and thank you for not diving in to any sex right away! Keeps the characterization going well and helps me take this story seriously. Can't wait for more. ^^
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic concept, I was wondering when someone on AFF would pick up on this great story point of the Dai li Brainwash.
Bravo!
hope to see it finished soon, I've even book marked it!
Bravo!
hope to see it finished soon, I've even book marked it!
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW.... That's all I have to say. Wow! The concept/idea is truly original and very brilliant. I like the idea of Katara as some sort of sleeper agent. Very nice writing and interesting way of placing the plot. Update soon. ^_^
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Katara and the Dai Li. I've never seen anyone write this kind of thing before. This story has a promising start, and I am eager to read more. :)