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May 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I feel...a tad cheated. But you do have a point. Only complaint I got is that you need to space out your lines, the words kinda blend into each other.
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May 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You need to watch the episode "Camp Fear" again. The birthday they are arguing about is six months away. Thus, it can't happen during the official 'one summer' of the original series.
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April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was great.
ALL HAIL DARTHDRAGON!
ALL HAIL DARTHDRAGON!
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was best story I ever read.Grandpa Max taking Ben and Gwen to a nude beach to fun in a hotter summer day,Gwen was so embarissing being with her cousin and grandpa totally naked on the beach and going skinny dipping or swimming at beach shore but she got over it for a while and she really having fun Ben and Grandpa Max. Besides I never been to a nude beach myself but I love to go there one day this summer that'll be cool.
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February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You said that you were evil for not putting sex into this story. I think that it was perfectly fine without it. In fact, with how young they are, they would not be seriously considering sex at all, so for how far things progressed between the two of them, I think that this is a very well written piece if literature, and a cute story all around. Well done.
PA
PA
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was really good fic you talnet
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Very good indeed! I would love to see more Ben 10 fics from you.
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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are truly a lord of evil and i have sent my army of Samurai Flesh Eating Pandas to slay you and prevent you from enacting any other crimes against the pervert nation but aside from that this was a great story very well written cute and romantic it seemed like they really had a relationship. But damn it that ending was so unfair
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
evil evil writer lol i so wanted to see more than a kiss outta that lol
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Not bad at all. Gives voice to the tension we all seem to see between Ben and Gwen without going into pornographic detail. No sex here, but at least THIS fic didn't involve horses (those who've read some of Clayton's KP works know what I'm talking about). :p