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for Bart the Ripper II: Mothersnuffer

by JayDee

person I came
schedule January 27, 2022 at 12:00 AM

I came

person Cerulean Dove
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You know who I think Bart should go after next (unless he's already gotten to her)?

Nikki McKenna from "Stealing First Base". She screwed with Bart's affections worse than Jessica Lovejoy ever did! Also, will there be like, a flashback scene of Maggie coming home to find her family brutally slaughtered? That would add more depth to the story and maybe even some psychological/mindfuck elements too :) I really hope you add another sequel to this especially considering its been over 4 YEARS since this story came out lol XD

Cheers and happy writing!

CD

schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Definite horror-film stuff, JayDee. Still not enough to make me reach for the brain bleach ... maybe just not watch Simpsons reruns.

Thanks, PW
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yarg. that was the most sickst/fucked up simpsons fic EVER even more than maggie's rampage. how about in the next one jessica lovejoy teams up with bart?

that'd be schweet

-Gurofan29-
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy....damn dude. that was.....damn. ill read anything that's not male/male but....wow. that'll teach me.


my stunned gibberish aside. I think it was very well written. keep up the good work while i go find something happy to read....
person Anon
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story. make a third Bart The Ripper!!! and seriously, will Maggie be OK? i hope so. maybe someday there will be...
MAGGIE THE RIPPER!!!! (dundundun!)
another thing i wonder... how many other girls DID bart get??? and if so, who?
and WHAT might i ask, compelled bart to do all those heinous deeds in the first place??? another horrific, somewhat erotic, and overall awesome story from Joandoe
5 stars
Anonymus (i spelled it right this time. yay!)
update soon please!!!
person D4rK
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sick!!!!! Damn that wasnt most violent than Lisa one but it was really nice violence. Could you get a Laura Powers next??. And what about Maggie?. Later

From Venezuela
D4rK