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for A Fevered Brain

by SSJ04Mewtwo

person Lady Delilah
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, all out of fireballs--all I've got are wicked grins, a couple of laughs, a big smile for the story and of course, for the shout out to me as a beginning inspiration. While I definitely have to say thank you for the shout out you totally made the story your own and I loved it. It's cool that it's a one-shot too...in my mind I'll just have Daria develop her skill to where she's concious and the werecat is like a mood that talks. You know, like when you've just got to do something and your mind is racing ten miles a minute with obsession? Though I get the feeling since you said the werecat only comes out during the first light of the full moon I'm betting Daria is the mostly concious one anyways. Irregardless there will be no fire from me, unless it's to wish you a firey sunset the next evening you look out your window (and from me, that's a kind wish, not a negative).


Take care
and thanks for the great read,

Lady Delilah