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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
interesting! good work lol
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The idea that that sort of thing happened actully fits nicely.
I wish there'd been a little more conciousness of what they were doing and what it meant though. A little more concern from Aladdan about hurting Jasmyne would also have been nice.
Overall, I'd call it 3 1/2 out of 5.
I wish there'd been a little more conciousness of what they were doing and what it meant though. A little more concern from Aladdan about hurting Jasmyne would also have been nice.
Overall, I'd call it 3 1/2 out of 5.
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An interesting look into something that could have happend. in the movie if only disney was more adult that is. good plot. nice flow over all just a nice bit of smutty love fic. Hot. Sexy. Emotional and very well done.