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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this and I cannot wait to see the next chapter. Excellent start to this awesome story.
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.
Please say that you are updating this soon. I need to read more. The way you write is mesmerizing, I love the interaction of your characters it is so fluid and natural. Beautiful job.
~SafeHaven~
Please say that you are updating this soon. I need to read more. The way you write is mesmerizing, I love the interaction of your characters it is so fluid and natural. Beautiful job.
~SafeHaven~
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Please write more I am Addicted to this already. I love the writing style you have. CONTINUE!
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have another Awesome story on your hands. I love it. Please have chapter 2 in the works as I write this review.
Lillybugs
Lillybugs
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What will Zuko's plans be when he meets Cheif Wan and Katara. I think he wilkl have a serious chat with himself and maybe his revenge will take a back seat. I love this already. You are my favorite author because you have such variety in your writing. You are awesome. Hurry and update!
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely enthralling!! I want more! I was dissapointed when I saw that I couldn't click on the next chapter! I love the new take on Zutara (hopefully) and I can't wait to see what you do with the story!
Lady
Lady
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Captivating!! I beg you for more. I was glued to the screen. You need to write more ASAP and if you did not get my words before. WRITE MORE Walkingpapers
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHH! Hurry up hurry up! What will he say to the Dragon of the West? Please update soon!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it I hope you update soon.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this new story !!!! Please have the next update on the way. Awesome beginning