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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE! This is so sweet I love this already.You are an awesome writer. All of your stories are addictive and awesome. MORE!
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be one hell of an awesome ride. I love what you have her do far. Keep updating at your pace your writing makes it worth well. Excellent job!
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really cool story, I truly enjoy the way this one is shaping up. I want to read more, please update soon.
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, love at first sight. Isn't it romantic? I do hope Wan will be eliminated quickly, he's way too big an ass. And why is Ursa, Zuko's mom in cannon, Katara's mom here? That seems a little...odd... Well, until chapter 3. Laters.
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully done!. I must say you are an awesome writer. Let the muse feed and grow within you and never stop writing you are awesome at it. Bring on the next chapter.
Coreena
Coreena
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a trully fanstatic story I am hooked and panting for more. I love your worlds of fiction. Wisdom
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
w/ the heat between katara n zuko i think they might melt the south pole. wan sure made a fool out of himself... we know he is goung 2 it again but he is dangerous. r aang n sokka going 2 have any love interests? will yue make an appearance? n the biggest question of all... will katara n zuko be able 2 wait until their wedding night?
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A quote from this story
"She was worth the fight of her people. She was worth the desire. She was worth...him. HIs eyes slowly prasied her body as they cascaded over her. A savior is what she needed a savior is what she had."
Your wording in this story is awesome. I love the Way you bring Zuko and Katara together and how he forgets why he is there and how the others see him mesmerized by the Princess. I wonder what will drive him away from her if not his vengeance.
I think Wan is a liar. He is hiding something. I do not think Yue has anything to do with his being there.
Is Sokka really over Yue and what role will Toph have in this. Aang does not seem happy that Sokka is neglecting Yue. What will he do?
I love all the scenes you have the way they all mesh together is perfect. I wait for the next chapter. FAB
"She was worth the fight of her people. She was worth the desire. She was worth...him. HIs eyes slowly prasied her body as they cascaded over her. A savior is what she needed a savior is what she had."
Your wording in this story is awesome. I love the Way you bring Zuko and Katara together and how he forgets why he is there and how the others see him mesmerized by the Princess. I wonder what will drive him away from her if not his vengeance.
I think Wan is a liar. He is hiding something. I do not think Yue has anything to do with his being there.
Is Sokka really over Yue and what role will Toph have in this. Aang does not seem happy that Sokka is neglecting Yue. What will he do?
I love all the scenes you have the way they all mesh together is perfect. I wait for the next chapter. FAB
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the twist and very intimate moment with Zuko and Katara. More please!
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, i like your storyline with this powerful zuko. so update, i want to see where this story goes.