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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man nice start to the story love the flesh eating snapping turtles. Horrible way to go but that's what he gets for mouthing off am I right. Also nothing better than watching an American butcher the French language. Awsome job with the scene in the dressing room too nothing better than two friends getting reaquanted. Really can't wait to see if Ron puts it down major on Bonnies sister and then whoops Demontors ass. Looking forward to the update.
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy.. I bet Ron's thinking what did he get himself into.. and I bet that he's going to sleep with both Connie and Lonnie. Excellent beginning.. can't wait to see what you have in store next.
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story mate :D I take it this story is some time after the ending of KP Chapters...I will be waiting for the next chapter....I got to see if Kim finds out about BonBon's and Ron's deal :D
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy here we go again with the pro. So ROn is stuck with BonBon, Connie and Lonnie in Paris? They are going to have to rename it to the city of Lust instead of Love. Bet Dementor's plan is hypnotizing Valentine Day cards but not its not going to be easy with Ron around. Keep up the fabulous work.