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I'm so happy you posted this story here, I like authors to see the count reader go up so that they know I'm rereading this. This is such a wonderfully hawt story and I'm all agliber now and have a hard time typing, uhhmmmmmm:)

Awesome ending.
I think 3.12/3.13 would be so much better if this had been a scene.

If you do a part two, Have Toph join in... .please?

If you do a part two, Have Toph join in... .please?

You have GOT to do a Part 2! Please!

I had add this story to my memories list on LJ but I didn't know you had posted it here as well. This is a great freaking fic, I really love this story and really enjoy rereading it.

oh my goodness that was hot can we ask for a repeat performance please please great job on this keep up the great work

So I read this over on LJ sometime soon after you had posted it and was completely blown away. You've written something that is entirely possible based on the situations and is SO realistic. It's rare to find an author that writes sex the way you do, clearly you personally understand it which makes the story that much better. I find myself reading smutty fanfic and just shaking my head a lot of the time because it seems the author either doesn't quite convey sex in a realistic way or hasn't ever had experience with it. However, you've done both and managed to add a very nice and touching bit of storyline. Kudos to you, I know I'm not alone in wanting to see this storyline continued.

Lovely.

Oh my god, this story is so hot!! I hope there's more.....please write more!! :)