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for The Penance Series

by lala82

person waynerd
schedule November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
woohoo! an update! Christmas came early :] this series is awesome! hope to see more!
person kimpo212
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT! so far its the best one I've read with ZUTARA *_*. you set up the scene perfectly, and in my own perverse way- I could see that happening in an adult version of the cartoon, lol. very detailed, bit of humor at the end... and I would love to read more ^_^
person Dee Surigao
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! HOT! I really, really love this story. Please continue, cannot wait for the next installment. I will be looking forward to it.
person poornmiserable
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was so awesome please continue this it could get as big as the teamwork fic in the narutoverse
you are awesome and so is this story :]
person moviefan
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. Especially the first chapter
person Gigi
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God...oh God do you have any idea how amazing that read was…damn near orgasmic. Fantastic work and please PLEASE don’t stop writing. Make me want to go draw inappropriate images to match you’re exquisite descriptions.
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great sequel. i love the episode cross-overs. me wants moooore!
person charizardag
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHOOO!!! That was an awesome chapter. Keep it up :)
person AdamIam
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If you have ANYMORE I will read it...SERIOUSLY! Walkingpapers
person Ky
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll get straight to the point...excellent series please add more.