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You have NO idea just how much I've begun to believe this happened in the series! I automatically and seriously start to incorporate it into the storyline as if I actually saw the episodes for this and I really don't even think about it until I'm like: Oh waaiit... that was just fanfiction. Damn it!
You're just so good at writing this. I can't help it! You really got me. Now I just hope you haven't abandoned the story, that would make me so miserable! Please have another amazing rendition of a chapter to match your past ones for this next one soon!

What a good plot! Damn hot though sometimes so wrong in so many ways... what makes it so good is that everything is so believable. I like this even more than what is rated as tops. You just need a little more exposure, but I'm pretty sure many others would agree. You kick everyone's butt in realistic fanfiction here at the Adultfiction Avatar category, and in most other fandoms as well.

Excellent story - I love how you incorporated the actual storyline so smoothly. Admittedly, Katara occasionally seems a little bit out of character, but overall you've done a fantastic job with this - kudos.
I look forward to reading future chapters!!

Can you please write some more. You got me falling off my chair with this story. Its driving me nuts. Every single time I read it, I see something new. How you manage to describe their chemistry and their actions, and every character`s reaction is beyond me. You have a great little treasure here. Don`t leave us hanging any longer, please. I know I`ve read this a douzen times and its only the first time I review. Think of all your other fans! I`ll be leaving on a little trip, and if another chapter is not written by the time I get back I`m gonna cry. Anyways, love the PENANCE SERIES. And thank you.
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I'm delighted that you updated! I love the way your story is progressing - how you worked in, and tweaked, the happenings of the show. As someone a little more interested in the angst than the sex I can't tell you how refreshing it is to come across a story that pays as much attention to the actual storytelling as to the sex, and I'm loving the fact that we have a fresh source of angst for the two of them. Looking forward to your next update!

Please write more! this was so good and I want to know how it ends! Zutara forever!

hey my girlfriend told me to read this. lol hehe. good job. needless to say, after reading this, things got pretty hot at home between me and her. we got into character, if you know what i mean. so ya. keep writing. both of us want somore. she's gonna keep punishing me for what happened between Zuko and Mai if you don't write teh next chapter.

I owe you so much. Katara and Zuko are perfect in this story. How can it be possible for you to make these two so incredibly hot? Please, you must continue, I'm dying here! You're a wonderful writer!

I just want to tell you that you are awesome. You've made me love Avatar even more, and I didn't even think that was possible. You've made this story really believable and its all really in-character. Well, maybe except for the part when Zuko spanks Katara so badly, but hey, he had his reasons. Can't argue with that. hehe Anyways, its very well-written and your style is quite superb. Keep up the nice work!

Great story, girl. You are amazing. You had me really going there. You've made Zuko act so according to his character, its not even funny. And Katara- wow. Super. No matter how many times I read this, it always gets to me. I remember when I first read this. There was only 2 chapters at the time and I restrained myself from reading the second for a really long time before I finally did it. Of course, it was wonderfully stupefying. Then I suddenly found out that you had written a third. I went crazy. In a good way. Yes, it was mind-blowing as always. I love your writting. Keep it coming! :D