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June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well...well, allow me to just fix my face for a minute...there we go. Damn, I am impressed. All I have to say at the minute is ooooh snap this is good stuff. Though it seems to be on hiatus at the minute? Hope this doesn't end up be fated to be a deadfic, it's just a bit too awesome, you know?
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June 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was beautifully written!! I LOVED how you paralleld it with actual events in ATLA!! GREAT JOB!!!!
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December 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
any chance on a new chapter?
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December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wil we be hearing from you anytime soon?
There's so much I want to know! So many questions left unanswered!
Zuko and Katara must work it out!
It just kills me to think of Zuko's guilty pained face as Katara left him in the 3 chap. I loved the fluff, it made me feel so warm and fuzzy! The change in their interactions from before to that night was very well done, very good transition in Zuko's character. And the way Katara yields to him is undeniably heart-fluttering--her act of thanks did it for me.
I'd also like to add in a small review for chp 1. I think you did a great job of having it in Zuko pov, its so refreshing and intriguing to see what he has to say about their first encounter, and not Katara, who is left to remain mysterious and distant. Like before, very well described and believable. Also, for ch 2 I have to say that it was very enjoyable to read. And no, mainly, I adored the way you made the reader siffer with Katara, and for us to feel alone and far away from Zuko as she did. The only thing I would have liked to see in this chap is a stronger response from Zuko when he gets back from the trip. I feel like he really did ignore Katara, and that in reality, if he really did want her that much, he'd pay more attention to her before she'd resort to getting his attention the way she did. Anyways, sorry for the long review, but you deserved to be praised, and I just wanted to let you know that I consider this the best Zutara fic I've ever read and that you do all us Zutarans proud! ;)
There's so much I want to know! So many questions left unanswered!
Zuko and Katara must work it out!
It just kills me to think of Zuko's guilty pained face as Katara left him in the 3 chap. I loved the fluff, it made me feel so warm and fuzzy! The change in their interactions from before to that night was very well done, very good transition in Zuko's character. And the way Katara yields to him is undeniably heart-fluttering--her act of thanks did it for me.
I'd also like to add in a small review for chp 1. I think you did a great job of having it in Zuko pov, its so refreshing and intriguing to see what he has to say about their first encounter, and not Katara, who is left to remain mysterious and distant. Like before, very well described and believable. Also, for ch 2 I have to say that it was very enjoyable to read. And no, mainly, I adored the way you made the reader siffer with Katara, and for us to feel alone and far away from Zuko as she did. The only thing I would have liked to see in this chap is a stronger response from Zuko when he gets back from the trip. I feel like he really did ignore Katara, and that in reality, if he really did want her that much, he'd pay more attention to her before she'd resort to getting his attention the way she did. Anyways, sorry for the long review, but you deserved to be praised, and I just wanted to let you know that I consider this the best Zutara fic I've ever read and that you do all us Zutarans proud! ;)
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December 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL Did Katara take out his sperm at end of ch 3!?
....she. Didn't...
....she. Didn't...
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November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn. that's hot. got anymore? HAHAH
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November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR dammmit!!! how could you stop there?!?!! HOW?!?! T_T
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October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Rarely have I read such exceptionally well written and entertaining PWP! Loving it! Thank you so much!
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September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my that was great!!! Please say that there will be more!
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August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn, write something already! can't wait to see what happens. i hope hakoda finds out there's something going on between them...not everything, just something. muahahaa seriously though, post the next chappy already. 8D