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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was fantastic! The way Long Feng spoke, the way he handled it... very IC. Will he do something naughty to Azula too?
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story! I'd give it 10 stars if I could!
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot story! can't wait to read more!!
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I thought 'In the Forrest' was amazing but you really managed to top yourself. This was hot and creepy and sexy and disturbing and squirmy and cold.
Fantastic job. You did a great job keeping him in character and balancing Katara's emotions with her physcial reactions. The paragraph about the Siren's song was freaking great. I love the distance in that he didn't kiss her but nuzzled her, very cool. The whole end part was off the hook and you really got my heart rate up reading this.
This is brillant and as soon as fichaven is back up this is going on my fav list. I would put it up here but I can't quite get it to work out. I am sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next update.
Fantastic job. You did a great job keeping him in character and balancing Katara's emotions with her physcial reactions. The paragraph about the Siren's song was freaking great. I love the distance in that he didn't kiss her but nuzzled her, very cool. The whole end part was off the hook and you really got my heart rate up reading this.
This is brillant and as soon as fichaven is back up this is going on my fav list. I would put it up here but I can't quite get it to work out. I am sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next update.