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for Under Lake Laogai

by AloofandAndrogynous

person Jhondie
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was over and it isn't... makes me happy!
person Anon
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, being in Long Feng's position IS good... LOL. Loved how you had him figure out what his concubines needed. Can't wait for the orgy! w00t!
person Sandz
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I hope to see more of this in the future!
person Anon
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
do that suki/katara/aang you mentioned
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was... sizzling!
person Granite
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know there are just not enough good Long Feng stories out there; having said that I have to request that you continue writing because I wish to know what happens next.
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still hoping for a Dai Li/Katara orgy scene, but Azula's punishment was also sweet.
person Faerie In Combat Boots
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and entertaining story. I did feel only slightly sorry for Azula, but not too much. I look forward to moar...
person x1078x
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
creepy, but good. keep going!

maybe Aang can join the fun? Long Feng-Katara-Aang sounds like a good idea to me... you dont feature Aang in alot of your stories.
person BCStorm
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as usual!