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October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic!
You bring across Long Feng's menace very well.
I love Azula's restraints/outfit and would love to see more of its kind, i really like BDSM fics!
I really hope you continue with this fic!
You bring across Long Feng's menace very well.
I love Azula's restraints/outfit and would love to see more of its kind, i really like BDSM fics!
I really hope you continue with this fic!
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September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow ... what sexual tension each chapter has XDD
I uhm ... normally read male/male fics but this is a nice change. I don't really remember all what happened in Ba Sing Se ... like how long team avatar and team zuko where in the city ... and ... uhm wasn't zuko chaptered as well on some point? ... are you planning to bring in zuko as well? for Mei of course ... who would rescue a crazy sister XD
unfortunately aff.net doesn't offer story alerts like ff.net ... and ff.net has only 5 chapters? ...I guess you update here faster ... hope I won't miss the next update :)
I uhm ... normally read male/male fics but this is a nice change. I don't really remember all what happened in Ba Sing Se ... like how long team avatar and team zuko where in the city ... and ... uhm wasn't zuko chaptered as well on some point? ... are you planning to bring in zuko as well? for Mei of course ... who would rescue a crazy sister XD
unfortunately aff.net doesn't offer story alerts like ff.net ... and ff.net has only 5 chapters? ...I guess you update here faster ... hope I won't miss the next update :)
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update this soon!!!!!!!!!!
tired of waiting... need to know what he has planned!!!!!!
tired of waiting... need to know what he has planned!!!!!!
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July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update this soon
i am simply dying from anticipation of what long feng is planning next
though i absolutely loathed the azula bit (seriously NOT my thing)
the rest was smoking hot!
seriously now when ever i watch the show i see long feng and think 'i know your secret!!! XD'
i absolutely love his character now because you have given him this super awesome sexy/devious/cunning rather than just cunning.
he has the best imagination... what is he planning????
put me out of my misery and post it!!!
long live long feng's hidden revolution!
i am simply dying from anticipation of what long feng is planning next
though i absolutely loathed the azula bit (seriously NOT my thing)
the rest was smoking hot!
seriously now when ever i watch the show i see long feng and think 'i know your secret!!! XD'
i absolutely love his character now because you have given him this super awesome sexy/devious/cunning rather than just cunning.
he has the best imagination... what is he planning????
put me out of my misery and post it!!!
long live long feng's hidden revolution!
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July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more please i love it
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May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bosco x Katara?
I've never heard of such a pairing, but it would be interesting?
I've never heard of such a pairing, but it would be interesting?
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. I honestly cannot wait for a Dai Li/Katara orgy scene!
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey Aloof, I sort of had an idea for you next story, how about an AU where Ozai won the war and takes Mai as his wife and Katara as his concubine?
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update soon please, i wanna see the orgy. im so excited.
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOhhhh what a tease. I'm really looking forward to the next installmen. But I am very happy you are taking such time to develop the charactersn and their motovations. You are a wonderful writer and storyteller and I'm really enjoying reading this.