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for Sorry isn't enough

by LoonyLunaLovegood

schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhh... I don't think there's enough words in my vocabulary to describe my love for you and this story right now... Had all my favorite elements (dirty talk, ESL, cemetary fuck, corruption, biting, rain, etc.). I was kind of sad that it was so short though... But I guess that just kind of makes it more realistic, no? There's not enough cemetary sex out there, you made me so happy *hearts*
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woah, that was hot. X3 I'm starting to enjoy South Park Yaoi.
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I would love for you to write a second story.
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad you finished it ! I encourage you to write some more of the pairing if you'd like but I know what it's like when school keeps taking free time away so...just thanks for finishing this !
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I never thought I'd say this but I don't care how much skill you put in to this story just give me more! And soon!
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot ! Your writing skills are pretty good. I really hope you feel like continuing this !
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schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Ayame, MUST HAVE SMEX! haha. You're so cruel, this was way too short! Anywho, loved it, wanna hear more of it :D
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG
please continue!!
it was just...
WONDERFUL!!!
oh please oh please oh please continue!!
Must have smex!!! XD