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And it seems I was right, you do have much more story to tell us beyond the end of the series. I do hope Katara didn't loose the baby, that'd be so sad... And I'm surprised Azula was able to move as easily as she did, or sense she can't have dropped hers yet, can she? I'm pretty sure she had a few months to go, too. All that said, nice work, and I look forward, if a little trepidatiously, to your Book 4! Until then. Laters.

Well, I suppose that is one way for Hakoda to find out, at least he's taking it well. I am getting worried about Mai and Ty Lee, though. And the four episode finale is up next, it'll be interesting to see what you do with that, and somehow I don't think you're going to end there, are you? Well, until chapter 15, then. Laters.

An interesting plotline and an easy read. Keep up the hard work!

Well, it just keeps getting more and more interesting, doesn't it. I can't wait to see how Ty Lee and Mai escape being pit slaves(I'm actually subtly reminded of the first twenty to thirty minutes of Conan The Barbarian). And just what in hell did Azula do to Hama? I mean, I had no great love for the old woman, but still! And I like the small change with the Southern Raiders switching sides. And it's nice the rest of the gang know about Zuko and Katara, now, but I must profess to still looking forward to Hakoda's reaction when he finds out! Hehehehe... Well, until chapter 15/episodes 17-?. Laters.

Well, that went about as well as expected, except she forgot to tell him he's gonna be a daddy. I look forward to that moment. And I believe that On Ji is the same age as Aang, so she should have said twelve or thirteen years, not fourteen. Just saying. Well, until chapter 14 and episodes 13-15, then. Laters.

Ooh, and the hits keep coming. Nice touch that Toph knows about the baby, and Azula taking Hama. Probably the only way to get her bending back before the eclipse, huh? This just keeps getting more and more interesting. Until chapter 13 and the Day of Black Sun, then. Laters.

I see Azula's still having trouble regaining her bending, and it seems Katara is pregnant. That'll makes thing even more complicated when Zuko hooks back up with her and the rest of the gang. At least you finally updated again, I was starting to wonder. Well, until chapter 12/episodes 7-9, then. Laters.

this one really surprised me. i hope you finish this one

Okay, definitely changing the wheel here, but it's quite fascinating. I was especially surprised to see Onji switch sides, and your addition of her being betrothed to that jackass. It'll be interesting to see what you do with the rest of the episodes. Until chapter 11, then. Laters.

I really liked this chapter. I like seeing each episode rewritten one by one. I can't wait to see what happens with Zuko and Katara.