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Loved it! First chapter looked like it was based off one of Prophet's pics (always a good source). Adding Irma onl y adding in more yum. Looking forward to more.

And a big laugh at "The T!". A person with taboo-hate at this site? HA!

The is definately a great lemon cant say I enjoy the mother daughter thing but with the severe lack of good yuri here this one is a well needed break. Hope to see more soon.

Whoa dude, just whoa. I didn't realize that guys could write lesbian sex that is so much like the real thing. I am heartily impressed, and more than a little turned on. MOAR.

Honesty is the salvation of the Soul as I say. I'm not too find of the Mother/Other incest gengre but this is an above average fic. Far above. I like how you have Susan remain in her motherly role to "teach" Will how buissnes is done. The cookie doug is a nice thouch too. On top of my head I can't find something not to like so I'll give you a 4.5/10. To get a full 10 you have to work alittle (In fact the highest garade I'v given out is a 7.3 with one exeption) Well, keep at it. :D

BTW, you know of a beta looking for a W.I.T.C.H. fic? I have one in making and would like it Beta'd before official release.

You are a God amongst men, mister Gunwild.

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Great story so far, I hope to see more- I shall reserve my true vote on it for later, but for now I give it five stars (that makes two so far- SadaraX got the first if you're curios.) Anyway, I really look forward to reading more. WS.