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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ou, sexy, amusing and smutty. You POV and first person writing is wonderful, albeit you used some similar sentences multiple times, but I'm not going to complain about some considerably good DfxVm. Wonderful work! And I hope to see (oh yes, indeed see) more in future chapters!
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, very nice preview there, I can't wait for the full thing!
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I love the angst. Keep it coming.
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh gorgeous! Absolutely wonderful. I loved the dialog between the two- it looks like you put special care in what they were saying- and it shows in a positive way. It's calm and understanding, and I love the fact that you didn't have to go into detail with describing emotions when you easily supplied enough with actions and words to make a reader know exactly what the two are feeling. I can't wait for your next chapter. Vlad's ghost form attire is very interesting! I like it!
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great intro! There isn't enough of these DP fics around here, so all I can say is I hope you update soon- I'm interested! Vlad's pov was amusing, I love his brief assumption on Danny being a figment of his imagination. You're writing is great and captivating and lovable to read.