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for Doggy Style

by Clayton

person Thomas
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol read your Kigo fics, gotta say that the first was the best, the horse not bad lol this one was....very interesting lol if you do any others bout the three of them you best let me know lol
person anon
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting - good writing, though not my typical type of fic.
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Even without the beastiality, it was very well written. The only constructive criticism I can offer is this: Spell check. Several times, I saw where your fingers slipped and numbers got typed into the words. Spell check would have caught that.

Anyhow, you're a fine writer. You even respond to the requests of your reviewers. Keep up the good work.
person Clayton
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
http://youtube.com/watch?v=kwfbLH1fz1s