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July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I like this story... somehow... I can imagine Kenny in getting in that situation very well and also Cartman as mean enough to make him his whore...
Is this really complete? :) I confess I didn't look at the post-date but... I'd just love to find out more!!! Why did Cartman cry? And... could there be a happy end? *smiles*
Well... for now I'll just use my imagination ;)
Yours
Raphaela
Is this really complete? :) I confess I didn't look at the post-date but... I'd just love to find out more!!! Why did Cartman cry? And... could there be a happy end? *smiles*
Well... for now I'll just use my imagination ;)
Yours
Raphaela
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm too lazy to sign in. XD But anyway, god this was great. 8D I love Cartman/Kenny, but it's somewhat hard to find. =/ You a great job on it too, a few mistakes here an there, but not enough to be annoying. 8D Wonderful job. Also, thanks for the comment! =D
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this! The writing was great, and I think it turned into something incredibly original at the end, with Cartman. I kinda sat back and went, "Whoa." Great job!
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. At the very beginning I felt overwhelmingly sorry for Kenny and how he'd gotten to be such an addict. D: I seriously wanted to cry for him, mostly cuz I <3 him so much. I can tell now you have a thing for tragedy. (judging by the descs of your other two stories I'm going to read soon)
I noticed a couple of grammar errors, but you said yourself the fic hadn't been beta'd, so I guess it's not a big deal.
It was a good story, I like it. I think I can tell that Cartman is worried to death about Kenny, if not just angry and confused about his own sexuality. Anyway, I look forward to reading the rest. 8D
I noticed a couple of grammar errors, but you said yourself the fic hadn't been beta'd, so I guess it's not a big deal.
It was a good story, I like it. I think I can tell that Cartman is worried to death about Kenny, if not just angry and confused about his own sexuality. Anyway, I look forward to reading the rest. 8D
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, what the hell, this thing pretty much ruined my entire review for your story... Anyway, I liked the story, I loved Kenny so much in this fic and wanted to hug him throughout it. *whine* I saw some grammar problems here and there, but I know you said no one had done a beta for the story, but that's okay. Anyway, you're a very talented writer and I love to see your stories in this fandom, because honestly there aren't many others as good of writers as you!! I'm going to go read more of your stories now, and sorry for the loss of the entire review! Check out some of my stories if you haven't already. Lata!