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for revenge finally

by Daisycheesecake

schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I really wanna see more cuz i'd love to see DeeDee get hurt (am I a sadist? lol) Great job so far, but you might wanna space out the sentences/paragraphs cuz it gets hard to read all bunched up like that, just saying. :D