AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Quite, During Sex

by NickCallahan

person Bishonen
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great the only tip i have is to write more soon.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to know what Zuko and Toph did to azula! (about time someone brought her to her knees!) I want to know what Aang and Sokka do (or who) in the next chapter. And I love Katara's revenge! So please update soon and with more!
person TimKai
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Christ, as soon as the last three lines hit, I absolutely lost it. ouch, I bit my lip!

Grim, very grim for a time. How can you turn such a story around and make is so completely hilarious in three . . . freaking . . . sentences?

So cool. This isn't really a proper review, I know, but I just HAD to give voice to this.
person Bishonen
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was fucking great i'd been thinking about doing something kinda like this but you did a way better job than i could have hope for the next chapter soon and one thing you should remove this from the anime section because your not supposed to have multiple copies of the same story.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae