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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I only have three queries about the fantastic first chapter.
1) Was Mai facing Ty Lee's front or Back?
2) What was Katara's Tentacle made from?
3) What the hell did Combustion Man say?
Apart from that, first chapter was fantastic!
1) Was Mai facing Ty Lee's front or Back?
2) What was Katara's Tentacle made from?
3) What the hell did Combustion Man say?
Apart from that, first chapter was fantastic!
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What the hell did Katara do to Mai?
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome story! hope u keep going! great job!
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the story, katara a little ouc with the bloodbending, though that only makes it sweeter, cant really point my finger on ANYTHING to criticice at all. please keep up the good works cuz i for 1 will be looking forwerd for more:) and i still wonder wtf combustion man is up to.
(if my spelling is bad, it is because of the little green irish people.)
(if my spelling is bad, it is because of the little green irish people.)
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im confused about the sex scene
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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can understand 2,3 or even 4 hits to an excellent story but seven in a row...COME ON! This story is not worth that and you will seldom find a story that is! This story is maybe average at best. Shame on you!!!!!
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your title is bugging the crap out of me. Please check your spelling.
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Moar!!! Nice story, nice descriptions, nice everything! Get the next chapter out as quick as you can!
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy! Katara is really pd-off now! More of that waterhealing warm-up bending and what will Zuko do to Mai? Great Aang is an avatar sized pin-cushin only Azula or Zhao would be that stupid! I can't wait to see Sokka tame Azula, and I know when Aang gets back on his feet that Azula will be in BIG trouble! Please keep up the great work and if anyone deserves a royal rearend whooping (and kicking) it's Azula! So please let Azula be next! Four and 1/2 stars so far. (I wonder how Sokka and Toph play now?)
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not signed in right now, but I just wanted to let you know that I appreciate this story. It's well-written, with fun twists. I hope that Katara does it with/or has fun with Combustion Man, he needs some love too. As for Toph, i am a bit confused... she has a dick, yes, but does she still have her pussy?