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This could proove interesting. is this story a one-shot? If so I think you should turn this into a full story, it has alot of promise. My only complant is that your useing Japanese insted of Chinese which is what you should be using. If you look at alot of anime, and compaire them to Avatar, you'll notice the culture differances, Avatar is chinese (I know because I speak it and learned about it). I know enough about Japanese to tell the differance, I'm more educated in Chinese. If you would like to know about chinese culture more, I'd be more then happy to help, other then that, I'd love to read more, keep up the good work. Here is my email should you wish to ask me anything. Slytherin_whitch@yahoo.com

Good job. I hope to see more from you soon. DOT

Well done. I enjoyed this very much.