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by DarkWolves

schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great start, but can you please continue it!
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
to riyuzaki miyato: it's clearly an alternate stroyline, he's just using the original plot for his story.

anyway, i feel that this story has potential and would love to see more,
person stlajax
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is just the opening of an episode in transcript form.........
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like where this is going. and good job using a part of the actual storyline for you own story