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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey great story I LOVE IT!!! kept me on the edge of my seat ^^ and its great..but i had a thought...millie and olrich and hiroki and yumi sex :P BTW....im writing my own story..hope to have it put up soon ^^ well hope to read more form ya ^^ your very good ^^
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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like what you've done with this story thus far.
You should go towards a big group sex outing (though I doubt Hiroki/Yumi will be that well received). I imagine Aelita getting roughly taken by any three of the boys at once would be right up her alley, and I'm sure the guys would like to see the girls go at it with one another...preferably with someone (say, Yumi) sports a strap-on just for the occasion.
Regardless, I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
You should go towards a big group sex outing (though I doubt Hiroki/Yumi will be that well received). I imagine Aelita getting roughly taken by any three of the boys at once would be right up her alley, and I'm sure the guys would like to see the girls go at it with one another...preferably with someone (say, Yumi) sports a strap-on just for the occasion.
Regardless, I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The orgy..... definitely go with the orgy idea! I'd love to see a Millie and Ulrich pairing, even if it's just for a chapter, and Hiroki and Yumi is also something that I have thought about!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story, but I'm REALLY disappointed that Aelita cannot get pregnant...... hoping that will change in one of the future chapters...... maybe as a 'SURPRISE!' from Xana.
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uitstekend! (Excellent)
A wonderful piece, I do look forward to the next chapter. I implore you to continue.
From,
His Imperial Majesty, Byron, Second Emperor of the Netherlands
A wonderful piece, I do look forward to the next chapter. I implore you to continue.
From,
His Imperial Majesty, Byron, Second Emperor of the Netherlands
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love the story so far, great pacing for a story like this.
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm for the romantic interlude.
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far.
I think I'd like to see Yumi give it up to Ulrich. I know I can't be the only person to think that, right?
I think I'd like to see Yumi give it up to Ulrich. I know I can't be the only person to think that, right?
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I should say that if you want more sex and whatnot, check out my other story 'Passion', that's got the more sexy side of my writing. This is my first attempt at more of a love story.
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great new third chapter to this story. Ulrich using a 'glory hole' while thinking about Yumi being pregnant.... just perfect! I really hope to see more of this story and hope that Yumi and Ulrich get it on sometime in this story.