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for Always there

by Leftshoe

person lycan
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A suggestion since you already wrote the next part. you should write an alternate version of this story where she waits to tell them instead and go from there.
person lycan
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I highly doubt anyone would let there 14 year old daughter's 13 year old boyfrind move in with them let alone share a room.
person John M. Daulton
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okaaaaaay, Aelita has gone from annyanomus prostitue, to nymphomainiac, and now to full blown whore. My kind of story.
person John M. Daulton II
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sequel anyone? All in all, one of the hottest stories i have ever read ad now oone of my favorites, why's Mille break up with Hirokie, and i think you should this story from, their point of view too.
person John M. Daulton II
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If Yumi STAYS with Willam, i'm gonna have to kill something (It's obivous she dosen't like him).
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story was amazing. I loved it - the orgy party was insane. I really do hope there is more to this story, definitely one of my top 10.
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
keep it comin i LOVE your story ^^ hope theres more and more ^^
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT FIC IS HOTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's the hotttest one i've ever read, and i think you should continue with it cause i would love to read MORE, and i think the other readers would like to read more too.
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, I read the first chapter but it might take me a while to read the rest. So far it's pretty good. You've got good writing skills. =^-^=
person lb54
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree wholheartedly with your higher quality=less reviews theory >>;;

it is a good story! I give you a good review XD

but yeah,sadly if its not yaoi or something no ones gonna review....gits <<