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September 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I saved this a few years ago, but never got around to reading it until just now. Really nice work.
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November 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey there I just finished your story; and found it absolutely entertaining and captivating, as well as sexy and funny. I love how much Kim and Ron adore each; and how in every chapter they had sex in a completely different and new place, this was a very romantic and horny story that you made up here and it was just excellent!!
THANKS. =D
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting short stories on a basic premis but when you write you don't check your work but let spell-checker do it for you. Which is fine up to a point, but it mixed up whet for wet, their for there.
-Bill Ponder
-Bill Ponder
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another fun chapter, I really love this story and your writing style. The only criticism I'd give is that you tend to make Ron a much more confident than would be in character for him. He is a goofy seventeen or eighteen year old boy, not the main character of a romance novel.
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've said it before and I will say it again, I think that these stories are just exceptionally well written. Dirty, but charming and makes us appreciate the couple all over again. Well done.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You manage to keep the story interesting, despite the insane number of spelling and sentence structure errors. You say "Madras" instead of "Mattress" (how you came up with that, I have no clue), "Tweeps" instead of "Tweebs 'Twin dweebs, Dweebs Squared'", to quote Kim from "The Twin Factor", and your incessant use of "then" instead of "than", "use" instead of "used", and even one instance of "Farther" rather than "Father".
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. There really is nothing more to say beyond that. It's simple, it's beautiful. Perfect.
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like the story so far you gotta let me know what the deal with those charms are though. Are they all the same or are they different charm designs to represent the different places that they've done it.