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by Bahamut

person Anon
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have quite a few grammatical errors littered throughout the story. But otherwise, it was cute. I didn't read any of the sexual parts, mainly because I'm not really into underage incest, but I thought everything before that was great. I like when Bart and Homer bond