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for The Twilight Shore

by Rann

person Tiamateraszu
schedule February 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
great story and hoping you will make an effort to post the remaing 18 chapters looking forward to when you do
person devilking
schedule November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well.... that was different. buwahahah, fbi wont get no, kim pos-i-ble.
i wish you'd write more.... i REALLY do but.... i'll just have to imagen the end.
Drakken starts hunting the pack, the pack joins with Punk's GJ team, together they barely beat Drakken, or maybe bring his previous personality back(then they'd figure out the nanites). then the pack manages to liberate Punk, Punk might get betty emotional. the pack takes over all of seatle. GJ makes a big play against the pack. the pack barely pulls through. the end!

there i finnished the story for you:P. its a pretty crappy ending but hey, never said i was good.
lol but seiously, if your even getting this message i really like this story, and REALLY hope that you finnish it:( even if you make it quick!!! anything to tie up the loose ends :P
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked "The Dark Ocean" -a lot- and I was REALLY looking foward to reading the complete "Season 2" (The Twilight Shore) and "Season 3". Do you plan on finishing writing them? Or, if you already have, where could I read them?
person Alcandre
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is an amazing series. I'm not sure why people haven't reviewed it more. I'm sad to see that this hasn't been updated recently but I still wanted to let you know that I have really enjoyed reading "Dark Ocean" and "The Twilight Shore". The way you have written Kim has really impressed me. A more mature and hard Kim Possible is something that Disney could never do. Well done! I hope you can continue this!
schedule October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well all i can...say...is..WTF!!!. HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH THIS STUFF LOL ITS AMAZING....i can't wait for more of it
person feifei08
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great! finally a sequal!! Update soon, please.
person Neihaera
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If you think getting the series on DVD would help, maybe we who are slavering to hear the rest of the tale should take up a collection, pick them up for you, and send FedEx over with them, eh?
person Neihaera
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know it'll never happen, given the copyright issues with the Evil Empire (aka Disney) ... but if this tale did find its way to a bookstore shelf, I'd buy at least a couple copies. God knows there is enough drek out there pretending to be literature, something as well written as this, with characters one can actually care about, SHOULD be up where it can be properly appreciated.
person firelarc
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man the first seaosn was awosme i hope this is just as awsome. cant wait to read more
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I managed to read this whole story (The Dark Ocean and all the extra side stories too) in about the space of 3 or 4 days a little while back and was really amazed with it. I guess I should apologise for not reviewing and showing my appreciation all those months ago when I first read it. I dropped by to see if you'd updated with a new chapter and now I feel compelled to read it all through again, it really is a wonderful piece of writing.

Even if you don't continue this, I'm really glad you wrote as much as you did and allowed me to read such an awesome story. It has such a different feel to the show (and I'm not just talking about the more obviously adult themes within the story), yet it stays very much true to the characters and that's incredible. Almost everything is beautifully described and I love how you give every character their moments to develop and take the spot light.

Hope you do continue though!