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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying the plot of this fanfic! I'm especially glad that your original character seems to be a little more complex than most; it's even better that he doesn't possess a backround story that can be explain in a paragraph. I've found that I'm focused on the Captain as well as enjoying Azula's reactions to him. Please, continue your efforts!
P.S. Was the bit about the halberd in Ch.5 supposed to be some sort of innuendo? Cause it seemed like it to me. ^_^
P.S. Was the bit about the halberd in Ch.5 supposed to be some sort of innuendo? Cause it seemed like it to me. ^_^
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, FLIRTING!!!! O.O
I Like this fic, I can't judge in a grammatical way, English is not my first language (take the fact that I’m not having problems to read it as a complement, if you will ^-^ ), but I can say the history is very cool. I Like Azula Fictions were she Isn't having affairs whit people from her family or friends and I like the way this particular fiction is developing.
The only thing that bugs me about this fic is Ty Lee’s name; it is Ty, not Tai… Not a big deal actually since her a Mai are very IC, especially with Ty trying to get all the attention to herself, that really go with the “Six sisters that look-a-like thing” of “The Beach”
And Azula is very IC too, that’s Rare, she is a difficult character to write about and Tasuya… I think he is sexy! OoO
So, More Please??? *Puppy Eyes*
(You Know, you could put this on FF.net, You would get more people reviewing it, since every body there will not be just expecting a Sex scene =^.^=)
I Like this fic, I can't judge in a grammatical way, English is not my first language (take the fact that I’m not having problems to read it as a complement, if you will ^-^ ), but I can say the history is very cool. I Like Azula Fictions were she Isn't having affairs whit people from her family or friends and I like the way this particular fiction is developing.
The only thing that bugs me about this fic is Ty Lee’s name; it is Ty, not Tai… Not a big deal actually since her a Mai are very IC, especially with Ty trying to get all the attention to herself, that really go with the “Six sisters that look-a-like thing” of “The Beach”
And Azula is very IC too, that’s Rare, she is a difficult character to write about and Tasuya… I think he is sexy! OoO
So, More Please??? *Puppy Eyes*
(You Know, you could put this on FF.net, You would get more people reviewing it, since every body there will not be just expecting a Sex scene =^.^=)
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UHU, I've been waiting SO LONG for a Fic “Azula/RandomSoldier”, AND it's Better than That, It's Azula/CaptainRandom.
I Like your OC btw, I would like to see things a bit on HIS POV.
I'm looking forward for the sex... (THERE! I SAID IT!!!!)
I Like your OC btw, I would like to see things a bit on HIS POV.
I'm looking forward for the sex... (THERE! I SAID IT!!!!)
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very good, but I think I need more chapters to give a better review...
Plz?
Plz?
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, hope to see more