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person Anon
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SWEET JESUS IN HEAVEN, WHERE IS THE NEW CHAPTER??? I CAN'T WAIT ANY MORE!!!

And by that I mean I love this Fanfiction... Please Update soon...
person DRACUS
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is starting to get very interesting, continue with it please I would like to see if Azula has a very erotic dream about her and Tatsu.
person kubot
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story... you do such a good job of keeping Azula in character, and your OC is really well defined and constructed. Keep it up! I look forward to the next chapter!
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, glad to see you gave a reason for why this story is on AFF.net, but I like how you're taking things slowly. Tension and build-up just make sex scenes better to me. Keep up the excellent characterizations and update soon. ^^
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweet! Been looking forward to lemons ever since I started reading this fic. Go ahead and take your time then! (not too much time; it's too addicting to wait several months for a new chapter)
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright. I had reservations about this story at first, but it got better & better. Very well done. Perfect characterizations & writing talent. Can't wait for an update. ^_^
person Anon
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Got to love the way you're building tension, even if it is something more subtitle right now, and Azula is starting to feel (and already feeling) something for him. (Which, make sense if any thing is going to really happened, it will come from her).
The Fact that you gave them both something in common (mother issues and people don’t like them) even if it is for different reasons.

Great Fic, keep going…
person Granite
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hate Azula but I find this story very interesting and will be looking for your next update.~Stone2fire
person jozepy
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, hope to see more very soon. I think you pin point Azula very well, as well as Mai and Tai Lee.
person kube
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story... nice job on Azula, she is very in character! I like your OC, Tatsuya, what a well-defined character you have created. Nice story.