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GENIUS!!! lol, amazingg!!!!!!!!!!!

Sssssssssssss!! Now, that was hot. I had figured Azula would be kind of awkward throughout this, but you had her pull it off quite cleanly and well within the boundaries of realism. I liked how the seeming foreplay was Tatsu's rantings about his past and the finale, his bloodthirsty brutality. I could picture Azula's trademark smirk quite clearly at that moment. One happy psychotic couple. ^_^

Lack of dialogue during the act aside from names helped it delve further into the spectre of realism. How Azula broke her "maidenhead" sounded plausible enough. I liked how Azula was on top and in control and yet did let herself go at some moments while Tatsu was under her control, physically and emotionally, and yet still brought some contributions to the sex. All in all, trenched in realism and very hot. Nice addition with all the biting and scratching. Rarrr.... *makes sure I still have "psychopathic woman" on my list of sexual fantasies*

Update soon. This story just gets better and better and your writing style never wavers. ^^

Just read your story, very entertaining. I would recommend a spell check program. Perhaps openoffice.org can supply one. You have a good writing style so far, but those small mistakes are like bumps in the road. Ruining a perfectly good drive. And also, *ahem* add the smut. The limey scenes you've provided so far prove that you do have some good potential there. Keep up the good work.

WOW! That chapter was so good... I could practically see the Agni Kai playing out, your descriptions were great. Also, I looove Azula's reaction to the Agni Kai, I can just imagine her sadistic smirking! ^^ I agree, looking forward to the smut!

Woot! One rotisserie-style roasted Earthbender, served up hot! ^^ Absolutely excellent detail in the fight sequences. It was heart-poundingly awesome and kept my interest with the display in range of tactics. Put simply, Tatsu was on fire (forgive the pun. lol)!

Update soon!!

I'm definently likeing where Azula's request to see him in her room after the fight is hinting at! Now hurry up with the next chapter! I want to get to the hot smex!!

INTERSTING, VERY INTERESTING KEEP GOING, I WOULD LIKE TO SEE WHAT AZULA WOULD DO AFTER THE FIGHT WITH THE EARTHBENDER IS OVER WITH, DO A ANOTHER STORY ASAP.

Ooooh, an Agni Kai. ^^ Earth against fire! Woot! I'm uncertain how to divide my gambling money. Ummmmmm... I'll put $20 on Tatsu over the Earthbender by a hair of a decision. lol Update soon. ^_^

Nice chapter, its finally going somewhere. But I was expecting some fingering in the bath by Azula, it would have made things much hotter.

I actually like how slowly & carefully you're treating this piece. It makes it seem all the more realistic the longer it takes to get to the sex. Absolutely brilliant job and the characterizations are as spot-on as ever, particularly the long teasing scene with Azula (thanks for making her little tease show realistic to her personality and sizzlingly erotic at once) and Tastuya where he desires to look but isn't sure if she'll fry his ass. xD Poor guy. Can't wait for more.