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This is a great story even if it is Azula-centric(not my favorite character). I will be looking for more!

Amazing
Spent the last 3 days reading it, every now and then.
I love this story and you have to keep going till the end of the series.
I'd love ot see how Tatsu will handle crazy Azula.... or if he'll even still be around.

Once again a good chapter, I can't wait for another sex scene. But you should totally go into Book 3. I would especially love to se what she does with him while she is going crazy.

Analysis: I'll have to agree with Azula that Ty Lee's teasing is annoying, but my other half finds it humorous and true to character. Splendidly done. Mai's characterization is perfect as well.

What I find interesting, though, is how Azula and Tastu will either continue or break this relationship. Which brings me to my answer to your question.

It's entirely dependent on you as to whether to continue on to Book 3 or not, but you have to consider how Tatsu, a lowly soldier not yet retired, could possibly travel to the Fire Nation in Book 3. Maybe he becomes a war hero in his own right at Ba Sing Se and this helps Azula's plans with furthering a relationship with him or something. Personally, if it's no trouble to you, I would love to see this extended to Book 3. All I know is that as long as you maintain the sheer quality of this work, I'll love whichever decision you go with.

I have to say this is one of the best stories I've ever read. The way you tell it is just so... vivid. Hope to see more of it in the future.

Very inertesting story dont see many Azula ones. The Characters are nicly made following the show. The way Azula juggling the Captain, feelings for said Captain and her duty was done very well staying in tune with the character for the most part. Only a few spelling mistake nothing to really big to point out. Also notice the last two chapters (18, 19) were a little shorter then the rest but was alright, you may want to just combine them later.

Hmmm... These aftermath chapters are interesting. I find it intriguing how Azula seems to be juggling this changed relationship with Tatsu. On the one hand, she seems to be reprimanding herself for doting on him and "falling" for him; on the other hand, she seems to enjoy it, in a sense. All in all, a very realistic portrayal that's easily believable. And, despite Tatsu not having said much since the whole affair with the princess, he's still as badass as before. I could picture that War Minister both annoyed and quaking in his boots at once. ^^ Update soon.

Wow...great story...I was reading it over my phone (believe it or not), and just had to keep clicking to the next chapter. I like getting Azula's POV...you've kept her true to her character while allowing readers to imagine that the cruel, evil b**** of the TV series might have a bit of a heart. I can't wait to see how the rest of this unfolds. Thanks for writing! :-)

Oh, please tell me you will not stop just because You Made (Perfectly Made, btw, probaly the best one I have ever seen) the sex sceene... I Want more of this fic, I want to know what will hapend with Azula and Tatsu (I Love him, he is great, he can be a really nice guy or a vicious murder, I love it about him, he is the kind of guy I would fell for... As weird as it seems.. (I am a girl btw XD)).

Please don't stop.

Can't wait to see more!!!

Update soon...

Very well done. I'm thoroughly impressed with the amount of thought and effort shown in chapter 15.