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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I haven't finished this yet, but I really like your OC. Normally I'm a giant Tyzula fan and can't see her with anyone else, but this works!
That would be really cool if someone drew a picture of them. Not that I'm offering. I'm a terrible artist.
Can't wait till I reach the end.
That would be really cool if someone drew a picture of them. Not that I'm offering. I'm a terrible artist.
Can't wait till I reach the end.
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August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is never going to be updated again won't it? *sigh*
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
COME OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story first found it start of last year and never got round too finishing it. Read the first 3 chapters last year and the rest over last Week, God Azula my favourite character in the series its just that she just so... EVIL! So, wonderfully evil.
As the Dai Lee Stated to Long Fang "she so inspiring & frighting at the same time!"
And I loved the Ember Island chapter of the show wherer she states too Ty Lee how she's jealousy of how boys just fall all over her shows at heart she really is just a teenage girl (who just happens too flirt poorly due too her life as the Fire Nation Princess, me thinks she needs too spend more time in the court and a little less in the war room... lol).
But I digress.
At the start of the story I wasn't too found of the way you pro traded her but as the story processed I was glade too see how in character you kept her.
Almost forgot too say something bout our fave Captain... You've or should I say because of how you had Azula ask bout his past in chapter 15 and his sudden realisation of great truth in chapter('s) 28 to 30 has completely broken his mind. I can't wait too see how you play this out in the next chapter('s) of his shell shocked mind and the title the Dai Lee gave him Berserker was just the icing on the cake.
Once again I can't wait for the next chapter. Would you mind giving me a Buzz with its up!
Keep up the great work.
Don't let Azula be too hard on him.
As much as I would love too see them get together in the end of your fan fiction. I love more too see them torn apart, makes it more realistic that way. After all Azula is still no matter what the Princess of the Fire Nation and it is the duty of the royal class too marry for power and or, peace. Sad as it can be it is truly rear is it for her class to marry out of love.
As the Dai Lee Stated to Long Fang "she so inspiring & frighting at the same time!"
And I loved the Ember Island chapter of the show wherer she states too Ty Lee how she's jealousy of how boys just fall all over her shows at heart she really is just a teenage girl (who just happens too flirt poorly due too her life as the Fire Nation Princess, me thinks she needs too spend more time in the court and a little less in the war room... lol).
But I digress.
At the start of the story I wasn't too found of the way you pro traded her but as the story processed I was glade too see how in character you kept her.
Almost forgot too say something bout our fave Captain... You've or should I say because of how you had Azula ask bout his past in chapter 15 and his sudden realisation of great truth in chapter('s) 28 to 30 has completely broken his mind. I can't wait too see how you play this out in the next chapter('s) of his shell shocked mind and the title the Dai Lee gave him Berserker was just the icing on the cake.
Once again I can't wait for the next chapter. Would you mind giving me a Buzz with its up!
Keep up the great work.
Don't let Azula be too hard on him.
As much as I would love too see them get together in the end of your fan fiction. I love more too see them torn apart, makes it more realistic that way. After all Azula is still no matter what the Princess of the Fire Nation and it is the duty of the royal class too marry for power and or, peace. Sad as it can be it is truly rear is it for her class to marry out of love.
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Need my fix already.
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March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I haven't reviewed in awhile.
Anyways, after the first sex chapter, it seemed like the story and your writing was getting sloppy and a bit rushed for a little while, but then you upturned everything and set things back on track as soon as the Ba Sing Se chapters came around. Azula, love your analysis of her character and her conundrum of caring for another person; Tatsuya, I'm finding his character weakening, but I'm sure you'll firmly resolve that, too.
Keep up the great work. ^^
Anyways, after the first sex chapter, it seemed like the story and your writing was getting sloppy and a bit rushed for a little while, but then you upturned everything and set things back on track as soon as the Ba Sing Se chapters came around. Azula, love your analysis of her character and her conundrum of caring for another person; Tatsuya, I'm finding his character weakening, but I'm sure you'll firmly resolve that, too.
Keep up the great work. ^^
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... aside from grammar and punctuation mistakes, this is very, very good. you've captured Azula very well, better than I think i've seen anyone do before. you've given me a lot of good ideas, as to what she was like during the war, for my own story. the sex scene was great, classy and descriptive without begin overtly vulgar. keep it up, and I look forward to reading more.
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It took me two days to read it but I think this is a great story. Although, some parts were long winded, it is still great. Please continue on I will be reading
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful story! You have successfully created an in character, totally believable relationship for Azula (no mean feat) while resisting the impulse to overdo any smut. I would love to see more of this story continuing into book 3 (and beyond if it can still work). Also your in-depth understanding and knowledge of the show and it's characters has produced a fan-fiction that very much achieves that holy grail of fanfickery: writing something that reads like the original. Bravo! Well Done!
now back to work! :D
now back to work! :D
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, I think you should extend it into Book Three. The process and enormous effort required would seem daunting to many, but I believe you have the ability to succeed. I'm also interested in how you would weave your OC into the plot while simultaneously keeping the alternate story of azula. It'd be a real treat to read such a work. Though, if you want to move onto other things, you can always end at Book Two. Either way, I'll certainly keep reading.