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June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with Tim, even if his grammar is off. This situation you've put us in is Bullshit.
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June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Here Here
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June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's been awhile since I last reviewed this. You haven't failed to disappoint. Admittedly the amount of content is less than favorable, but if you can keep up the current pace then that will balance out. No major issues of note, you know how to format and spell, and I seem unable to find a misused word.
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June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit this is my first story Ive read like this. Happened across it while drunk and it's such a turn on Ive read whats available 3 times. I have to say Im a little disapointed in the cliff hanger though. I say either finish the sotry or at least let your readers know it will never be finished dont keep them haning.
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just stumbled across this story. pretty much everythings been siad thanks for a topic that most people dont write about. and a great story by the way
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
While the grammar copuld use some work at times over all a good story, though unfinished. The idea of sex between the kittens makes sense too sense they are the only ones of their age, I'm wondering why other's havent realized this. The writing is good overall though the cliff hanger is annoying.
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I stumbled unto this story, not much is written about the kittens. To repeat the others thank you! I hope to see more soon.
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June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes another Chapter thank you! I look forward to more
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June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you! a new chapter! I look forward to the next! Hopefully we will get some action soon.
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June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great Story so far, I wish you'd finish it :) I wait with anticipation.