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More, more, mooore. Kit, Kat, Cheetara threesome, freaking sweet.

Excellent story! I love these two in the new series and this was a really good take on the story. Personally I would have liked to see Wilykat simply uhm "finish up" while Wilykat watched, but that's just me. This story has great build-up which made it the first truly enjoyable straight fic that I've read in a while. All I can say is, thanks for writing this!

Fun little story. I want to see more

I check this story out from time to time to see if it is finished and am always dissapointed. it is a great story with potential but nothing drives readers away faster than an unfinished story

Eh, you're still writing and paying attention, that's a good sign.
Yes, the chapter is shorter than hoped for, but life often gets in the way, doesn't it? A short chapter is much better than no chapter at all.
No mindless praise for this chapter, but there's nothing wrong with it that I could see. Keep up the good work.

Thank you; Appologies If I was somewhat harsh in the past but I have been returning to this story always hoping to see it finished, it is a great plot and I truly appreciate your writing styale and anticipation, please just try not to leave us with TOO much anticipation as that can be frusterating.

Great story sorry to see there arent enough posts, please dont keep me hanging! Truly great writing!

grea and addicitive story! but thats the extent of my favorable review, the idea of withholding the story to to stroke your ego is bullshit. especially since what everyone is reading for hasnt even happened yet. if youve already written the next chapter how much trouble is it to post? I feel like your probably losing alot of fans rather than gaining them by this.

back again. Thanks for the update.

I understand where you are coming from about real life taking your time but honestly when you have chapters written already and are holding them just cuz your not getting the reviews you wantI feel thats crap. that is just dick stroking. and its torture for us since this is such a great story. I started out impressed with your writing now you leave us with cliff hangers every time and wait till we we write something to "reward us" screw that Ill just find another story to read then if you dont want to finish this one. Stop the ego stroking and finish the story or just give up, either way let us know, those of us that have done as you ask deserve that much! Just make up your ,ind either finish it or dont. youve lost almost lost me as a reader by the way. -Tim