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for Tomorrow

by whirleeq

person AE
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story. Beautifully written. Just...beautiful.

I never use that word, and here you've made me say it three times. Shame.

I'm looking forward to reading your other works.
person anon
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really sweet. I can see it happening like this between them too!
person InuMiko
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was just... wow... beautiful. nice to see a little kataang in the sea of zutara too.
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story, I really liked it, I'm so glad to see you back. This is usually a too sweet pairing for me I'm a die hard Zuktara person myself but you make this pair sing. I loved how you weaved Soka and wrote him so sweet and knowing. And the line of how Aang couldn't regulate his element was great. I love it when the elements are worked in as they are such parts of the persons personality. This was a great one shot and I loved reading it. Oh and the who lips skipped line was great, I love skiping.
person skyman
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
story was great. that is an extreme understatement, IMO. Rock on!!