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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your Kim and Ron are a wonderful couple. They deserve pleasure beyond imagining!
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. It's cute and funny and so erotic. Your description of Kim after sex is touching and sweet. Kim and Ron's love and lust for each other simply roars off the page. Definitely planning to read your other works.
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, awesome story.
So few people write a good one-shot with some awesome sex and a LOT of romance.
They usually have to turn it into some "epic" 48 chapter story with a plot few people enjoy.
Anyway, very good, I give ya top marks :).
So few people write a good one-shot with some awesome sex and a LOT of romance.
They usually have to turn it into some "epic" 48 chapter story with a plot few people enjoy.
Anyway, very good, I give ya top marks :).
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That story was so hot; you should totally write more of then! 5/5!
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not too bad in places. But also boring in quite a few others. I personally give it 3/5.
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is not a oneshot, right???
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it plz write more
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellant story a few grammatical errors but still very nice.
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like that you provided a lot of details for the action.