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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eeexcellent. The plan is coming together! XD
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good buildup so far.
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just...awesome.
I'm intrigued to say the least. Your writing style is pleasant to read, and I couldn't help but laugh out loud during a few parts. (Good thing no one else was in the room with me. xD)
Zim and Dib seem kind of OOC, but in the necessary kind of way, not the annoying-'gah I can't stand to read any more of this' type.
I can't wait to see where the plot is headed, aside from the obvious ZADR and World Domination parts.
So, basically, I really like it and will obsessively wait for more! =D
I'm intrigued to say the least. Your writing style is pleasant to read, and I couldn't help but laugh out loud during a few parts. (Good thing no one else was in the room with me. xD)
Zim and Dib seem kind of OOC, but in the necessary kind of way, not the annoying-'gah I can't stand to read any more of this' type.
I can't wait to see where the plot is headed, aside from the obvious ZADR and World Domination parts.
So, basically, I really like it and will obsessively wait for more! =D
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i love this story its great i cant wait to read more of this story to be updated. ^_^
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. Like, I REALLY liked this chapter. The interaction between Zim and Dib was so well done. WRITE MORE!
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please alert me to the next chapter this I think is going to prove interesting.
BTW you said Zim was fascinated by Zim's pheromones it should have been Dib's
kimamartin@shaw.ca
BTW you said Zim was fascinated by Zim's pheromones it should have been Dib's
kimamartin@shaw.ca
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your use of imagery. Keep up the good work!
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An update! Thank you. *hugs* I like Zim's main reason for disbelieving him, and that he can sense pheromones with his antenna.
Oh, I think I found a typo in this sentence: “Don’t try to tell me when I feel, Zim." I think the "when" here should be "what". It's not really a big deal, but I appreciate it when people mention mine typos/errors because it's extra hard to find them in my own stuff because I have a tendency to read it as what I know it should be instead of what I wrote it as. :)
You're still doing very well. :)
Email: gamblek@email.uah.edu
Oh, I think I found a typo in this sentence: “Don’t try to tell me when I feel, Zim." I think the "when" here should be "what". It's not really a big deal, but I appreciate it when people mention mine typos/errors because it's extra hard to find them in my own stuff because I have a tendency to read it as what I know it should be instead of what I wrote it as. :)
You're still doing very well. :)
Email: gamblek@email.uah.edu
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why do I see something unexpected lurking around the corner? ;) *g* Poor Dib, I'm afraid he'll get the shock of his life. Wonder how his psychologist will diagnose this? Because really, Zim loves nothing more than being contrary. *g* I might be wrong though. *wriggles expectantly*
Can't wait to see more. :)
Can't wait to see more. :)
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great so far! You're doing a wonderful job at keeping them in character (especially considering you're not an IZ uber fan ;))!
Looking forward to the next update!!!
Looking forward to the next update!!!