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I like this fic, and I want to know where you are going with it, but there are a couple things that seemed a little thin to me. I understand Dib's will to survive, but his sudden switch from 'You'll never take over Earth, Zim!' to 'How high do you want me to jump?' seemed a little sudden. Perhaps a bit more reflection on his part on how useless it has been trying to convince everyone of Zim's identity? Even just the quick exchange of 'Your laser will never work! I will tell everyone what you are and they will stop you' 'who's going to believe you, dib-worm?… That's what I thought' would better show Dib's loss of faith in his race (or something). The second thing I had a bit of trouble swallowing was the tallests' complete submission to someone who directly challenged their authority. Considering the arrogance of the Irken empire, I imagine them to just take this as a challenge and attack Earth anyway. An easy way to clear this up would be to make Dib seem much taller than them in the vid, since you've already connected perceived power with height in the fic, it wouldn't be a stretch for them to be a bit submissive to someone they perceive to be a giant. I dunno- just a suggestion. On a happier note, I really like the little taste you gave us of Zim/Dib in the previous chapter, and I like how you portray Zim and his crazy alien shenanigans :) You probably have other stuff going on, but don't forget this fic, kay?

OhmygoddessandgodandbejebusIloveyou!!!!!!!!
I can't wait for more! Write morrrrree! :)

Ooooooh, this is GOOD, more, pretty please.....! *puppy eyes* ^.^

Are you still updating this? Because you absolutely have to! I really want to know where you're going with this. I love it so far.

Wonderful story! It has so much promise building in it, I really would love to see more of this story! I do hope you will finish it up for us ^^ Also your portrayal of the characters is very nicely done. :D

Wow just wow i really love this! i can't wait for more!

I love this story! I don't know how old it is, but I really hope you continue doing chapters soon! I'd love to read the rest of it :D:D:D
The only thing is that I've never read a story with Zim taller than Dib xD So it weirds me out a bit.
But please continue writing!!

Great story, please make the chapters longer! I really like your writing stlye :)

This is INTENSE. I'm amazed they pulled it off--and rock on Dib, being all badass. You made me all warm and fuzzy making mention of me! I'm so happy you've resumed posting this!

This is cute.... though the previous chapter was a little weird... I just can't see Dib giving in like that without some resistance. But, this is fanfiction and very good fanfiction at that. Please update.