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This is very enjoyable, I'm looking forward to when they actually meet.

I am really looking forward to reading more of this story. Please update soon I will eb watching for it.

Well done, I look forward to the next chapter.

very good.

And the word of the day is 'succulent'...that was way too funny. Read all three chapters in one go today and I'm already anxious for the next update. Great job!

I'm not usually a big reader of Avatar fanfiction but I gotta say, I'm loving the hell outta this story. Its a little sad that Aang has matured so much and lost so much of his playful spirit, but thats the only path I can imagine for someone with a destiny like his. I see this plot device around a lot- Katara marries Zuko politically- But I like how you're going about it. Keep it up, I look forward to reading the rest.

Amazing!!!! Absolutely incredible start. You have wonderful talent! I was immediately sucked into this story from the first few lines. This story flows beautifully. There are no grammer or punctuation mistakes that I noticed. Though you have only written three chapters I can already tell this will be one of my favorite fics. It's going on the favorites list right now. If you have a mailing list in which you inform your readers of new updates I would love to be apart of that if at all possible. I really hope you continue to update this wonderful story. I know sometimes it's difficult to update when you have real life issues going on. I look forward to your next chapter!

I'm really enjoying this story so far. I think you're doing a wonderful job with it! I hope that you're able to update soon! Keep up the good work!

wow this is really a good story..you have tremendous talent..its written beautifully i really do hope you update soon....i would like to know if you will incorporate how well katara waterbends in this story, cause she is a kickass bender in season 3 especially the episode 'painted lady' and also i hope you don't write off her 'inner fire' cause a lot of authors with this similar plot make katara weak and domestic well keep up the good work and update soon

Impressive... already one of my favorite stories and it only has three chapters. Impressive