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for Tempestuous

by YoukaiFate

person Kasson G
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is now on my list as a story to look out for. Great job!
person Novicegirl
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought the lime was perfect for this story. It fit. Sometimes a lemon can be overly done and ruin the story for me anyway. I say you did a perfect job and if you want to rewrite it that would be fine because I know it would "fit" into your story.
Novicegirl
person Sable 24
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. I loved this chapter written lemon or not. Zuko's thought were good enough for me. Great job keep going I will wait for more.
person Allure
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Get on with it! Great chapter
person Alauralen
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I've been waiting for this ever since I read the last chapter. I would have liked lemons, but I understand that it is not always easy to get them out. Even without them, the chapter was wonderful! I think you did an awesome job! I know that you just updated, but I'm going to be impatient and beg that you get the next chapter up as soon as possible, LOL. Keep up the great work!
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg, this story is amazing. It was a great New Years gift to have a new chapter.
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is MORE. Nice job
person Bee
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! lol. What's his first words to her going to be? Will Katara actually let him sleep with her their first night? I love this story!!
person Jesse
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Please update soon!! Great story, you have me hooked. Can't wait!
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story